MY THOUGHTS ON YOUR COMEDY PILOT SCRIPT (WITHOUT READING YOUR SCRIPT)

  1. Your main character is unlikable
  2. Not sure how you would keep this show going for several seasons
  3. Your female character who's good at her job but "bad at love" is cliché and boring
  4. Your male character who's a "nice guy," but unmotivated and secretly in love with his female friend is boring and cliché
  5. What are the stakes?
  6. It needs a joke pass