MY THOUGHTS ON YOUR COMEDY PILOT SCRIPT (WITHOUT READING YOUR SCRIPT)
- •Your main character is unlikable
- •Not sure how you would keep this show going for several seasons
- •Your female character who's good at her job but "bad at love" is cliché and boring
- •Your male character who's a "nice guy," but unmotivated and secretly in love with his female friend is boring and cliché
- •What are the stakes?
- •It needs a joke pass