QUICK THOUGHTS ON WHAT WAS TERRIBLE ABOUT "THE LEISURE CLASS"
Project Greenlight strikes again...
- •The Election SubplotWhat office was Fiona even running for? Congress? State Senate? Fire Commissioner?
- •"Someone has deficated on the Bentley..."I guess since he wrote a poop joke, Jason Mann is a human. Just an unfunny one.
- •Why did a hooker show up again?
- •And just because he had a hooker in "The Leisure Class" how was this script like "Not Another Pretty Woman?"
- •Jason Mann spent more time thinking the dicks drawn on the Senator's face then he did on actual story.
- •The ImprovJust because a British person says something on the spot, it doesn't make it funny. Good improv comes from character work. Unfortunately, good characters weren't created in this script.
- •The Pillow Fight/Not Roller Skating Scene(let)I hope this wasn't the setup that made Twojay question crew safety.
- •Leonard's ClothesWe get it. He's British. He's impish. Ugh to ascot over sleeveless T shirt.