STUDIO NOTES I HAVE RECEIVED ABOUT MY SCREENPLAYS/NOTES I HAVE FOR MY MOTHER ABOUT HER TEXTS

  1. Too long
  2. Too dark
  3. Too graphic
  4. Too many characters
  5. Middle meanders/hard to follow
  6. Character choices jarring/unsettling
  7. Tone
  8. Feels more like an indie drama
  9. The joke about the monkey was funny I guess